why are you there
Its was December 2030 west Mackson Texas. Eveything took place in the city of Heywood in the woods where everything is a place of lies and wonders of death. what can go wrong?. There was once a young middle age lady name Neshia Green, she was dark-skin, had red eyes, tall, and very quite. Neshia Green was bulled everywhere cause she lived in the woods. Well to everyone that's weird.So one day there was two people went to Heywood woods and their name was Lexie Woodson and Ahmari Woodson they was twins nothing could break them apart. Lexie and her brother Ahmari got lost nobody wouldn't even dare to take them for a couple days because the didn't have no where to go.They even didn't have any money. So the twins went to the woods and found this nice size house. Ms green house where its hell down down SHIT will they die will they live what happens?The twin went inside and so Ms green. MY OH MY she was so nice to them i guess she didn't tell that she was killer. Even the way she looked knew something was up but did they leave. MS GREEN had a nice personality when she let Lexie and Ahmari stayed they didn't know she killed 25 people whoever came to her woods.Would they be the next 27?.
" hey since nobody wants to take us lets go walk around in Heywood woods" said Lexis.
" well okay nothing could go wrong maybe we could found so money in the river lol" said Ahmari.
" your funny Ahmari" said Lexis.
Lexis and Ahmari started to walk and walk till they find a good ending wishing would this day get better? So they was looking, wondering even tho they had each other they didn't have nothing so would they give up? would they stay together?
" O MY FUCKING GOD!. Lexis turn around hurry" said Ahmari.
" what Ahmari ? Ahmari its a house ." said Lexis
"Duhh Lexis lets go in and see who in there maybe are day wont be bad after all" said Ahmari.
" but wait !!!!! " Lexis.
well everything wasn't going to bad as we say. After they looked at the house they started to walk in. This house wasn't like no other house. This house was big had no windows and even it smelled really bad. I guess she didn't want anybody to see her home or even come it. Her house was so scary and black.
"What the hell is that smell " said Ahmari.
" OMG it smell like dead people ewe or is it us ?" said Lexis.
" who at my door? why are people here? asked Ms. Green
knock knock knock as they knock on her door.
" is somebody there can we talk or come in ?". said both of them
" hahah I guess someone want to die." said Ms. Green
as they talked to Ms. green she started to think what to do should I kill them now or play it off with that nice personality she so called had and killed them later hahaha.
" hi MS Green am Lexis and this is my brother Ahmari ( hi nice to meet you )."
"hello guys come come on in take a seat please. so what's bring you here on this sunny hot day?." Ms.Green said.
" well eacallay we are lost in this city. Where we don't have anything but each other we live alone and are family is gone " Ahmari said.
Well what you mean you live alone with out no family? " Ms.Green asked.
two years ago are mom and dad went on they honeymoon to a camp out in this city, I remember it was a cold winter and they was so happy to go away. Well later on that year we had a phone call from are aunt saying we found your parents did in the city of Heywood in the woods" lexis said .
"umm can you give me a min" asked Ms.Green.
"sure " the twins said.
"HOLY SHIT!!!. I killed there parents, I do remember those years back. when they came to stay in my woods and I found them laying in a red and blue tent with fire and food all around it . that's when I got mad and took a wood on fire then threw it on there tent."Ms. Green said (as she was talking to herself).
Ms. Green didn't know what to do after thinking she could killed lexis and ahmari mom and dad. she was so angry that she started throwing things cause she took someone's family away. she started thinking of ways to kill the twin for they can be with there family. Would Ms. Green learn her lesson ?
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